very detailed
I think you were very specific with your reasoning. I also think that you used information from the book very well. But i think you should speak a bit clearer next time.
I like your claim and how you have very good reasons to support it.Something you can change is, you don't have to say "This is my intro" it makes you and the book sound less professional.
Great work and great supports!
I liked how you used an universal truth but I think that you shouldn't have said "This is my introduction".
I like how it was very detailed and how you put in a lot of reasons to support your evidence.But i think you should use a more clear voice
Great job explaining! You might need to clear your voice, and you don't have to say "This is my introduction," but it was still awesome!
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very detailed
ReplyDeleteI think you were very specific with your reasoning. I also think that you used information from the book very well. But i think you should speak a bit clearer next time.
ReplyDeleteI like your claim and how you have very good reasons to support it.
ReplyDeleteSomething you can change is, you don't have to say "This is my intro" it makes you and the book sound less professional.
Great work and great supports!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used an universal truth but I think that you shouldn't have said "This is my introduction".
ReplyDeleteI like how it was very detailed and how you put in a lot of reasons to support your evidence.But i think you should use a more clear voice
ReplyDeleteGreat job explaining! You might need to clear your voice, and you don't have to say "This is my introduction," but it was still awesome!
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